This silence, Echoes…

The silence we have now

Doesn’t give me peace

It makes the battle more furious

Between what my heart wants

And what my destiny gives.

I long for you more

I crave for you more

I thought of you more

And I can’t even sleep 

Without a dream of yours

Then what’s the purpose of this silence

If it has to make me more miserable

If it is sucking life out of me

Flesh by flesh, blood by blood.

Your words

Though not meant to hurt me

Stabbed straight through my heart.

My armour is broke

My shield is in pieces

And now my life is just skin thick.

A little push, a little drag, a little more hurtful words

And I turn

Into a body, no more alive, no more viable.

You don’t know

But Inside

This silence




14 Comments Add yours

  1. well penned 👍
    stay strong man.. blessings ❤

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  2. Ssameera :) says:

    May I add some words to your silence.?
    There are people who don’t know
    How cruel their innocent words can be
    They echo in dark nights
    They go deep in heart
    But remember some words are meant to be forgotten
    Because life is such.
    We need to move on
    Because time doesn’t wait.
    We need to love ourselves more
    Remember you can lose people but your own soul stays forever. ♥

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    1. Sameera,
      Thanks for completing my poem or to say giving it a positive ending. Its not easy to forget someone or just start loving yourself. But I have to say, friends like you do make this life beautiful.
      Thanks Sameera, thanks for your beautiful poetry. You added stars to my poem.

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      1. Ssameera :) says:

        You overwhelms me everytime ..! god bless you OL. 🙂

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  3. A dark and a poignant poem. I guess we all return to the darkness then and now.

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  4. Sifan says:

    This one is a gem

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thanks again sifan. Thanks for stopping by.

      Liked by 1 person

  5. stbarbebaker says:

    Perhaps it is really as Martin Luther King, Jr. says ” In the End, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends. ” Wishing you a Happy New Year in the solidarity of your friends

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    1. Happy new year to you too.
      I hope my turns better soon.


  6. Enigma says:

    Dark and elegant. I know it isn’t easy to move on but remember in your each cell, there are mirror images of Universe. The Universe loved each atom of yours. You are a creation of magic. Your haemorrhaging heart is a magic. Don’t let that magic fade, please.
    Stay Strong.
    Stay Blessed.
    Your friend,
    PS: I am all ears if you need any.

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    1. Thanks Enigma. You are very kind. I am trying to move on and at some level, I have. But she comes unexpected.
      When I try to smile, when I am with my family and loved ones and also when I am alone. I sometimes feel guilty of trying to happy. Sometimes I feel if I moved on then my love for her might seem false. It isn’t.
      But, as you are, I have made few friends here. They are helping me in every way possible. I want to thank you with all my heart and will surely contact when I feel down.
      Thanks again. Friend.

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