ME

I am strong,
None can break me,
If you find myself brought down,
Than its just a bad phase,
For a transient, a rough sea.

I am whole,
Not remnants, not pieces,
If you find me shattered on the floor,
Then It is just me rebuilding myself,
My outer shell may differ now but I’ll remain same at the core.

I am complete,
Not someone’s half body or half soul,
If you see me longing in pain,
Then its me only introspecting,
To bring out the blazing sun to end the gloomy rain.

I am strong,
I am whole,
I am complete,
I am ME,
I know what I am and I know what I will be.

~Samar

22 Comments Add yours

  1. Sakshi says:

    Wow ….this is beautiful. I love the positivity in it. Very well written

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    1. Thank you Sakshi.
      Its weekend again but I don’t want it to become “weak-end”.
      So wrote something positive. Kuch credit tmhe bhi.

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      1. Sakshi says:

        My my comment mein bhi positivity….very impressive ………I am so glad you are trying not to make it weak- end. Aur credit ke liye …let me take a bow …haa haaa thank you Samar 😊

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      2. 😳😳

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      3. Sakshi says:

        Is this a surprise emoji …or what are you talking about emoji???,πŸ€”

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      4. That was for you taking bow.
        Hey ram itna to socha hi nhi tha Maine.
        Not talking emojis…πŸ˜‰

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      5. Sakshi says:

        Haa haa just showing gratitude my friend …….ab credit Diya hai toh itna toh banta hai😝😜

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  2. Sameera says:

    Yipeee!❀️❀️ Dedicate karo mujhe yehπŸ˜‚

    I love the end lines of each stannza, the way everything ended, embarking a new journey.πŸ’πŸ’

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    1. Hahahaha. Tum to periodic healing table ka pehla element ho. Meri Hydrogen…
      First and foremost credit to Ms. Sameera Mansuri (The poetic elixir), the rebel, the skeleton, the Weaver of liberating poems, the enchanter, the black magician,……, and so up to the ‘N’.

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      1. Sameera says:

        Hahaha!πŸ˜‚
        Maths padhao chalo ab.πŸ˜‚
        Itni tarif sunkar toh mei coriander ho gyi.

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      2. Aao tmhari chatni bnata hu….

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      3. Sameera says:

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ nahi

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  3. This is such a motivational piece. I so love it

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    1. Ohh! thank you Shantanu… I feel honoured by your comment.

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  4. Wow….A Masterful Piece!!!!! I loved your post!!!! So inspiring!!!!! πŸ’™

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    1. Thank you so much Patty.
      I feel great that you really liked my post.

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  5. Another such a positive post bhai 😍
    Loved it .. πŸ™‚ : ) : )

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      1. Welcome Bhai πŸ™‚

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      1. You’re welcome

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